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The shadow of a pine tree

Posted on: June 5, 2010

Light
or dark
is decided by
the shadow of a pine tree, who
stretches her arms
ahead of
an ordinary
day of
May
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11 Responses to "The shadow of a pine tree"

I especially love this one. How our whole reality is affected by this simple pine tree, who “stretches her arms/ahead of/an ordinary/day of/May.”

So simple, yet so complex, in so very few words. Nicely done!

Really appreciate this. Light and dark, Decided by the shadow- Can be simply shade or it could have a much deeper meaning. Excellent work:)

a beautiful retrospect of nature in spring

two sentences, a perfect image painted.

thanks for all of your wonderful comments! truly appreciate them.

great concrete poem!

This is really lovely =)

so much packed into so few words, beautifully done.
~Renee

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