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Impression – Reading Monet (3. Sunrise)

Posted on: December 31, 2010

3. Sunrise
The Sun
reluctantly
woke up from
her morning dream
carelessly
dropped some
whispers in water –
broke the calm
reflection into
pieces of
dancing
ripples

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10 Responses to "Impression – Reading Monet (3. Sunrise)"

Beautiful, Yuni! Your poetry is full of grace, like Monet's painting. Such lovely music. I particularly like your use of “reluctantly” and “carelessly” in the poem. I imagine after all these eons, that's exactly how the sun would feel when it wakes up.

I had always wanted to writing something about this painting and I am happy that I finally captured that “impression” in my mind.
Thank you NP! Your comments mean a lot to me, always.

This is a beautiful piece. I really like the 'dropped some whispers in water' image. Most beautiful.

Thanks Fatuous Anility!

super beautiful.

Lovely =) You have such an elegance to your poetry

thanks Jingle&mindlovemisery!

simple, elegant, expressive. Everything I love about poetry

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